I've tried to format the page as you would see in a book, with indented paragraphs and white space only between sections. I'v also put the text in a table so it covers 75% of the page. it looks better.
as usual I am hit by the "web page design doubts."
Does it look ok?
Will non-graphic readers show it?
Will people think my design is crap?
Will people laugh at my page code?
I wish I could do nice designs like Pan.